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Thursday, April 30, 2020

Boss Baby???


Hi, for my writing post this week we had to write about what it would be like if your brother could talk.
At the start, I had a lot of ideas but then they didn't really go with the flow. Near the end, it got a bit harder. But I still did the best I could. 
Have you seen Boss Baby?? Comment your answer.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 7, 2020 at 11:59 AM

    Hi Olivia, I love that you have written this about your brother, I bet he would think it is funny. When you are writing try and wrap your story up with a conclusion.

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  2. Ms CattonMay 11, 2020 at 10:42 AM

    Hi Olivia
    This is a clever and funny piece of writing. I really like how you used descriptive language in your story, great job. Remember to proof read for punctuation.

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