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Thursday, March 26, 2020

Terrific Teeth


For my third learning task for reading tasks, I did teeth. the link is on the second page. the first story I rushed through and it didn't turn out well so for the next story I took my time and I really liked it.
The moral of the story is to treat people the way you want to be treated.
Do you like fishing? I do.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 1, 2020 at 11:38 AM

    Hi Olivia,
    I like how you have completed the writing from two perspectives. It reminds me of when we did that piece of writing on Geri who was playing chess. My next step for you is to try and intertwine these characters into one story together. Keep up the great work!

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  2. MrsKerinApril 15, 2020 at 5:27 PM

    Hi Olivia, I really admire that you have reflected on your last writing and thought about how you can improve it- that shows a great growth mindset- Well done!

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